tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8804220152564892710.post2981758946170254764..comments2023-06-26T08:04:29.405-07:00Comments on Originals: Day 3bttrflyscarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11528604993293399160noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8804220152564892710.post-42966987898610770422010-04-16T19:27:29.501-07:002010-04-16T19:27:29.501-07:00<3<3bttrflyscarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11528604993293399160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8804220152564892710.post-17042572837916376572010-04-15T21:11:37.203-07:002010-04-15T21:11:37.203-07:00Agreeing with Suzy and Dana that the descriptions ...Agreeing with Suzy and Dana that the descriptions in this poem are amazing, but I really, really love the lines: <br />"And so the way that person is<br />when we first fall in love<br />is always inside of us."<br />Because I completely agree with it, and it can be a positive or a negative, really. <3 Fantastic.WednesdayRainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13640335685351460735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8804220152564892710.post-3996120272570375502010-04-03T20:34:06.732-07:002010-04-03T20:34:06.732-07:00he does of course, bowl of cereal in hand. lolhe does of course, bowl of cereal in hand. lolbttrflyscarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11528604993293399160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8804220152564892710.post-63325809983273357752010-04-03T18:06:10.715-07:002010-04-03T18:06:10.715-07:00Suzy pointed out my favorite part, too! I hope Joe...Suzy pointed out my favorite part, too! I hope Joel reads these poems you write for him. :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416300760517862018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8804220152564892710.post-11102889801562122642010-04-03T10:31:42.308-07:002010-04-03T10:31:42.308-07:00Thanks Suz! That's Joel's favorite part to...Thanks Suz! That's Joel's favorite part too! :)bttrflyscarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11528604993293399160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8804220152564892710.post-47130832239321057422010-04-03T00:23:24.776-07:002010-04-03T00:23:24.776-07:00I enjoyed your take on a 'romantic' poem o...I enjoyed your take on a 'romantic' poem or dedication. :)<br /><br />I really love the lines,<br /><br />"We are exquisitely aroused<br />and have effervescent eyes<br />that gorge themselves on<br />the way that fireball displays<br />vitalities on the water."<br /><br />Great description, Amy!annazushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11351747868393769273noreply@blogger.com