tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8804220152564892710.post4594418937125158484..comments2023-06-26T08:04:29.405-07:00Comments on Originals: Day 2bttrflyscarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11528604993293399160noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8804220152564892710.post-37852518774086251692011-05-27T07:54:10.053-07:002011-05-27T07:54:10.053-07:00aw, Joel, thank you. <3aw, Joel, thank you. <3bttrflyscarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11528604993293399160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8804220152564892710.post-18514176190324047052011-04-18T17:25:38.675-07:002011-04-18T17:25:38.675-07:00A great piece that is both literal and metaphorica...A great piece that is both literal and metaphorical. What's interesting to me is that both scenarios are gripping within the context of ignorant upbringing.T Rumblerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09322715718646305539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8804220152564892710.post-70048987868962218532010-04-16T19:28:07.754-07:002010-04-16T19:28:07.754-07:00You are my new best friend lol.You are my new best friend lol.bttrflyscarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11528604993293399160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8804220152564892710.post-90247209087042521752010-04-15T21:09:20.290-07:002010-04-15T21:09:20.290-07:00Ahhhh love it!
"They just
barely hold our wei...Ahhhh love it!<br />"They just<br />barely hold our weight,<br />and furthermore, do not<br />always set our paths<br />as straight."<br />and<br />""Once you cross your bridges,<br />you set them aflame,<br />and you cannot recross them,<br />and we are not to blame.""<br /><br />Are fantastic! Sometimes your insight boggles me!WednesdayRainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13640335685351460735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8804220152564892710.post-41572621221863525332010-04-04T21:10:05.068-07:002010-04-04T21:10:05.068-07:00Suzy, thank you. <3Suzy, thank you. <3bttrflyscarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11528604993293399160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8804220152564892710.post-33950033367625904302010-04-03T00:25:26.291-07:002010-04-03T00:25:26.291-07:00This is an exquisite piece of writing. The repetit...This is an exquisite piece of writing. The repetition in the poem works very well. <br /><br />I love the part about the 'reminders'.<br /><br />Brava!annazushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11351747868393769273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8804220152564892710.post-68049752055942336482010-04-02T14:28:06.912-07:002010-04-02T14:28:06.912-07:00Thanks Dana! Provincial people usually don't m...Thanks Dana! Provincial people usually don't make for life-long friends. <3bttrflyscarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11528604993293399160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8804220152564892710.post-61316226957204069082010-04-02T13:47:57.134-07:002010-04-02T13:47:57.134-07:00ooh I like this. I love the idea of questioning wh...ooh I like this. I love the idea of questioning what you're told (psh, you and I never do that!), and for providing a reminder when they throw something else back at you. I think the repetition and the bit of rhyme at the end are very effective, too. :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416300760517862018noreply@blogger.com