My originality is only due,
to my inability to copy you.
Gentle with an ending that playfully hits one and makes one grin. :)
A hint of mischief, makes me wonder who is is about. Enjoyable.
You have such a unique style, I am really intrigued by your view on the world
Sometimes that slap is the soundest connection made! I've needed it. I've given it. Neither end all that easy. Beautiful.
your imagery jumps out...skill
I loved that I didn't "get" this but it was so fun to read. Embrace the mystery! good writing, as always! - mosk
this is lovely, Amy! I too noticed the hint of mischief, and I adore the final two lines. :)