My originality is only due,
to my inability to copy you.
aw, true. sigh.
I really enjoyed this piece
thanks all :)
You say a lot in a few.
How very true.
succinct, lovely, great imagery
Amazing how much can be said--quite beautifully--in so few words.
Amy,Very real words. Loneliness can be hidden and difficult to satisfy.Eileen
Beautiful poem I love your work
Yes... there is a burden associated with possessions, with stewardship. Terrific, Amy!
A concise and truthful observation. Hungers of many kinds need to be fed...
This sounds rather Confuscian:)
Lovely piece, and so concise and effective.
Countable number of words, but countless things said. So true.
your comments are lovely. thank you.
I, too felt a Confucius vibe in your words~
True. The wealthier we become, the more we lose.
Interesting notion, and true. My curiosity wants to know, why hunger? Hmmmm...
Beautiful, short and sweet but poinient
So succinct and meaningful in few words. A poets dream!
I loved the piece for the groovy somersault it gave my brain, but once it settled and I thought more I'm not certain if I completely understand your logos- thankfully though I don't have to! Peace.