My originality is only due,
to my inability to copy you.
Oh a synthetic strawberry... Simplicity at its finest.
Nicely done :)
yes painful for both of us lol.
I love that last line. Your poems are so charming!
Well, I nevah! I guess synthetic is beter than no strawberry at all? Nice writing. You've set my mind to wondering.
it takes some talent to say so much with so few words, thanks for writing
Yikes! Very nice image.ZQ
I have to agree with deep on this: Ouch! But very rich in imagery... I'd have a talk with my love's eyes and hands though! The real things are just so much better (dipped in chocolate)! *smile*
nice delivery. *claps*
Really good. Says so much in those four lines and they read very well. :)