Tuesday, July 12, 2011

strawberry

July 12th

My love's hands and eyes
so full of surprise!

he sees nothing wrong with giving me
a synthetic strawberry.

16 comments:

  1. Oh a synthetic strawberry... Simplicity at its finest.

    ReplyDelete
  2. yes painful for both of us lol.

    ReplyDelete
  3. I love that last line. Your poems are so charming!

    ReplyDelete
  4. Well, I nevah! I guess synthetic is beter than no strawberry at all? Nice writing. You've set my mind to wondering.

    ReplyDelete
  5. it takes some talent to say so much with so few words, thanks for writing

    ReplyDelete
  6. I have to agree with deep on this: Ouch! But very rich in imagery... I'd have a talk with my love's eyes and hands though! The real things are just so much better (dipped in chocolate)! *smile*

    ReplyDelete
  7. Really good. Says so much in those four lines and they read very well. :)

    ReplyDelete

Reach for the clouds. . .

Tickle your toes. . .

Poets United Contributor