July 12th
My love's hands and eyes
so full of surprise!
he sees nothing wrong with giving me
a synthetic strawberry.
Tuesday, July 12, 2011
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Reach for the clouds. . .
Tickle your toes. . .
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Ah, 7. The number in question. During this process of developing my first full-length work of prose, and a memoir to boot, I have considered...
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lipstick on the teacup steaming bedroom eyes. glasses resting folded newspaper bookmarked novel. barefoot toenails pink lotion ringed finger...
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No one cares for me, because I once cared for you. futile attempts to invigorate the soil with hands un-gloved, dirty deeds to provide my li...
beautiful.
ReplyDeletethanks :)
ReplyDeleteOh a synthetic strawberry... Simplicity at its finest.
ReplyDeleteNicely done :)
ReplyDeleteOuch.
ReplyDeleteyes painful for both of us lol.
ReplyDeleteoh my!
ReplyDeleteI love that last line. Your poems are so charming!
ReplyDeleteWell, I nevah! I guess synthetic is beter than no strawberry at all? Nice writing. You've set my mind to wondering.
ReplyDeleteit takes some talent to say so much with so few words, thanks for writing
ReplyDeletethanks all!
ReplyDeleteYikes! Very nice image.
ReplyDeleteZQ
I have to agree with deep on this: Ouch! But very rich in imagery... I'd have a talk with my love's eyes and hands though! The real things are just so much better (dipped in chocolate)! *smile*
ReplyDeletenice delivery. *claps*
ReplyDeleteReally good. Says so much in those four lines and they read very well. :)
ReplyDeletethanks!!
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