My originality is only due,
to my inability to copy you.
Nice use of spacing and short lines. I found myself looking out my window as I read this. The final image is wonderful. Thanks for sharing
fun one,Thanks for sharing.:)Jingle
Succinct and sweetly satisfying....!
Ahh -- love the simplicity. I've never been able to master the art of few words but you have done it brilliantly.
Short fun poem, simple enough to digest yet I'm able to think about it for a long time. (:- RPIMotion Author
Thank you both!
Nice short poem.all bless.
I can picture the scene. This is short and simple, but it works!
I love it! Great job =)
Nice image you've created with this one.Congrats on receiving your most recent award!
Loved this image, there is a good use of spacing. The image in my head was of my children standing absently absorbed in their own thing, it would be nice to be that way so unabashed.Nice post.
:) Thanks again all!
This is really cool...so light and delightful, :)
delightful play ...